I have added a few things to my article since the last blog. I have added the photos on the right page and have made it a little more quirky by adding a black background for half of the page. I htink this makes it lok more like a music magazine article, with more detail on. However i still need to change the main photo.
This is looking very professional Lydia. I'm looking forward to studying it in more detail tomorrow and will give you some last minute guidance then.
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I've had a good look at your whole blog now Lydia. Well done! this is an extremely impressive blog - very detailed at all stages. Excellent research into existing magazines which you have used to infrom your own planning. You use ICT confidently, to produce a very professional product and completed every component of the production on time. Planning, prepartation and drafting are also excellent. I look forward to seeing your evaluation powerpoint presentation and your audience feedback on your blog ASAP! Well done again.
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More congratulations for an excellent evaluation presentation today Lydia. Again you used ICT confidently and communicated your points clearly and effectively to the audience. You deomstrated excellent understanding of the forms and conventions of music magazines and I followed how you had used and challenged them in your own production. You addressed all of the other '7 evaluation questions'in a thorough and detailed manner, paying particular attention to how audience research and feedback influenced your work. there was a very honest evaluation of your strengths and weaknesses. My only slight criticism would be to use media terminolgy more confidently and precisely. Have a rest now!!
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